skatergirl13: that's better! .....could work on your spelling though....

avis: Too many mistyping in the story... But I know that not everyone master english language

lancecocuski1: yeah, srry

nicenicholas123: Yo lance, so far your story was sooo interesting that i was sad when it stopped in the middle of the story! I was Siked!

lancecocuski1: It dosent get cut off, chapter2 has started

cherokee_rose: Wow! I was a couple of days behind. You're doing a great job lance! I'll start chapter 2 next. Don't be in a hurry!